Thursday, 21 January 2016

Feedback on Rough Cut 1

I asked 4 people, after each rough cut, the following questions, on rough cuts 1, 4 and 6. The reason I did it on these rough cuts was to show the development and progression clearly, rather than after each rough cut, whereby development may be minimal.

If you were to give the film opening a rating out of ten what would it be?
Response 1- 5
Response 2- 6
Response 3- 7
Response 4- 5

Was the narrative clear during the film opening? If not why?
Response 1- No, as the match cuts were hard to see in context and made it hard to follow.
Response 2- Not sure why they he gave the bag over.
Response 3- I was unclear on why he was being chased.
Response 4- Not really, why was he training?

Did you find the film opening engaging or did you find yourself bored?
Response 1-  In a way, however the narrative made the film hard to follow.
Response 2- Yes, it was good because of it's fast pace.
Response 3- Lack of music made it hard to engage.
Response 4- Needs music as its hard to concentrate when the footage is this raw.

Rate the cinematography out of ten?
Response 1- 8
Response 2- 7
Response 3-8
Response 4-7

Rate the editing out of ten?
Response 1- 6
Response 2- 7
Response 3-6
Response 4-6

Rate the Setting of ten in relation with the genre?
Response 1- 6
Response 2-5
Response 3-6
Response 4-7

Rate the music of ten?
Response 1- N/A 
Response 2- N/A
Response 3- N/A
Response 4- N/A
(At this point we did't yet have music)

Did you feel there are any improvements that need to be made?
Response 1- Music is needed to provide a link to genre.
Response 2- Music is a must.
Response 3- Lack of music.
Response 4- Music is needed .

Specifically which part of the film opening did you enjoy and why?
Response 1- The match Cuts, but they need to be worked into the film better.
Response 2- I liked the use of several shot types. 
Response 3- The match cuts.
Response 4- The Go-Pro shots were engaging and provided good variation.

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